Topic 28: My Tell-Tale Ending

…louder! louder! louder! louder!  Those three polices were still chatting happily. They laugh really loud. They must know it. What should I do. Should I kill them all? Show I tell the truth? Should I run away? Should I …….. I don’t  I don’t know what should I do now! My heart beat became louder and louder and louder. Know, I can hear my own heart beat. I scream, I yield I can’t handle it. The police know it. They are laughing at me they trick me. No!!!! I want to kill people. suddenly, the man took the police gun and shout to the police and the police shoot at him too. The man kills two policeand the last police kill him. Before he died, the heart became more louder. The old man scream and yield. Now the heart beats slower and the sound goes off. He could hear the sound from the heaven, earth, even the hell. He saw a angle and demon fly to him and take his spirit away. He fell very conferrable now. There is no heart beat, no police and, on old man. No! why do I see a old man comes by, no it is the old man, what will he do nooooooooo.

Topic 27: Hints and Foreshadowing

In the story, the main character kept saying that he is not crazy. Especially when he killed the old man who with the pale blue eyes. He seems he is clam.  Also he could hear the sound from the heaven, earth, even the hell. It makes him look insane. Also the start of the story shows the fact that he is insane. He said “How can people say I’m insane?” I’m not “crazy” people said he is not crazy or insane shows he is insane or crazy because you will not say I am not crazy to other people. The normal people will not say that. We can just see he is a crazy and nervous person from the fact that I just show it to you. It is impossible to kill a people with no reason but he just did and he says he could hear the sound from the heaven, earth, even the hell. That is scary. This shows that he is unmoral. Also, when the police come to his house, he can hear his heart, that is unmoral too. Those of clues that we could find for the event, can made us see that is a insane and crazy person. 

Journal 26: Unreliable Narrator

In the stories, we read it by what the narrator says. Narrator is one of the most important character in the story. Narrator is crucial for the way a work of fiction is perceived by the reader. Most narrators present their story from one of the following perspectives. : first-person, or third-person point of view. Narrator shows the feelings, opinions, and perceptions of a particular character in a story, and on how the character views the world and the views of other characters but there is a narrator that we can’t trust. It is all Unreliable Narrator. In “The Tell-Tale Heart,” what clues does the author give us? It didn’t show much information about itself. That is the unreliable narrator. I think the author create unreliable narrator because the author want the reader to find out the place, character, and what’s’ going to happen by yourself. I think that is main reason that the author want to create an unreliable narrator. I had never read a story the narrator could not be trust. The story I read follow the most common story style which the narrator describe the place, time, character, and tell a little bit of what happen in the story.

Topic 25: Scary Stories

For a story to be scary, it must have scary things that make you fell scary. What makes the story become scary? It could be many things. In my own point of view, I think the scariest thing is to walk on the street in midnight by you. This could be really scary because there is no one and it is all black. Sometimes you will see some movement on the black area and you will feel very scary. You don’t know what it is. You will want to find out what is but you will feel very afraid to find out. Also you will not know what is in your back. You will fell like some things is in your back and when you turn back, nothing happen. Even though it is just you scared yourself, it could be very scary. I do not recognize people to go out over 11 o’clock because at that time the people will became lesser and lesser. It is very dangerous. You can easily go kidnap by the bad guys too. That is why I think it is scary to walk on the street during the midnight. For me, I will not go out over 11 o’clock.

Topic 23: What’s Worth the Effort

Although the girl Squeaky often says that it is very hard to take care of his brother Raymond, but I think she still care her brother. Raymond is a trouble maker and it let Squeaky feel very angry. The girl Squeaky often helped her brother Raymond to solve the trouble that he made. This can show that he really care about his brother. If there are some people bully Raymond. She will save him without reason. If it turns out to me I won’t save Raymond because I will be angry if a person keeps making troubles. I will not help him fight or argue to the fighter. There is always a reason for someone to fight you.  Although squeaky and Raymond often fight with each other, but they are still family. That is the Squeak’s point of view. She probably thinks family should help each other. She can’t let her brother got hurt. She care about his brother. I think Squeaky doesn’t like his brother but doesn’t dislike his brother. This is my point of view. Sometimes they argue with each other but sometimes they help each other. I believe Squeaky and Raymond care about each other like a brother and sister.

Topic 22: The Resolution

In a story, resolution is the end part of the story. It tells the reader the ending of the story. In my story, peter and Mike both wants the burger so they are arguing with each other. Still, the burger is peters. Mike really wants the burger. He had try out all the way to persuade or force peter to gave him the burger but peter is just to strong of Mike. Mike is very fat and short but peter is very strong and tall. He also know the kon-fu so he can easily beat up Mike. In the story there is no hero but there is a winner.  Peter lee wins the battle and get the burger. they play paper scissor rock. The person who wins three times could own the burger. Paper scissors rock is a hand game usually played by two people, where players simultaneously form one of three shapes with an outstretched hand. The "rock" beats scissors, the "scissors" beat paper and the "paper" beats rock; if both players throw the same shape, the game is tied. The first round I use paper and he use rock. The second round I use paper and he use rock. The third round, I use rock because I know he will use scissor. The conflict ended with a happy ending.