Topic 28: My Tell-Tale Ending

…louder! louder! louder! louder!  Those three polices were still chatting happily. They laugh really loud. They must know it. What should I do. Should I kill them all? Show I tell the truth? Should I run away? Should I …….. I don’t  I don’t know what should I do now! My heart beat became louder and louder and louder. Know, I can hear my own heart beat. I scream, I yield I can’t handle it. The police know it. They are laughing at me they trick me. No!!!! I want to kill people. suddenly, the man took the police gun and shout to the police and the police shoot at him too. The man kills two policeand the last police kill him. Before he died, the heart became more louder. The old man scream and yield. Now the heart beats slower and the sound goes off. He could hear the sound from the heaven, earth, even the hell. He saw a angle and demon fly to him and take his spirit away. He fell very conferrable now. There is no heart beat, no police and, on old man. No! why do I see a old man comes by, no it is the old man, what will he do nooooooooo.

Topic 27: Hints and Foreshadowing

In the story, the main character kept saying that he is not crazy. Especially when he killed the old man who with the pale blue eyes. He seems he is clam.  Also he could hear the sound from the heaven, earth, even the hell. It makes him look insane. Also the start of the story shows the fact that he is insane. He said “How can people say I’m insane?” I’m not “crazy” people said he is not crazy or insane shows he is insane or crazy because you will not say I am not crazy to other people. The normal people will not say that. We can just see he is a crazy and nervous person from the fact that I just show it to you. It is impossible to kill a people with no reason but he just did and he says he could hear the sound from the heaven, earth, even the hell. That is scary. This shows that he is unmoral. Also, when the police come to his house, he can hear his heart, that is unmoral too. Those of clues that we could find for the event, can made us see that is a insane and crazy person. 

Journal 26: Unreliable Narrator

In the stories, we read it by what the narrator says. Narrator is one of the most important character in the story. Narrator is crucial for the way a work of fiction is perceived by the reader. Most narrators present their story from one of the following perspectives. : first-person, or third-person point of view. Narrator shows the feelings, opinions, and perceptions of a particular character in a story, and on how the character views the world and the views of other characters but there is a narrator that we can’t trust. It is all Unreliable Narrator. In “The Tell-Tale Heart,” what clues does the author give us? It didn’t show much information about itself. That is the unreliable narrator. I think the author create unreliable narrator because the author want the reader to find out the place, character, and what’s’ going to happen by yourself. I think that is main reason that the author want to create an unreliable narrator. I had never read a story the narrator could not be trust. The story I read follow the most common story style which the narrator describe the place, time, character, and tell a little bit of what happen in the story.

Topic 25: Scary Stories

For a story to be scary, it must have scary things that make you fell scary. What makes the story become scary? It could be many things. In my own point of view, I think the scariest thing is to walk on the street in midnight by you. This could be really scary because there is no one and it is all black. Sometimes you will see some movement on the black area and you will feel very scary. You don’t know what it is. You will want to find out what is but you will feel very afraid to find out. Also you will not know what is in your back. You will fell like some things is in your back and when you turn back, nothing happen. Even though it is just you scared yourself, it could be very scary. I do not recognize people to go out over 11 o’clock because at that time the people will became lesser and lesser. It is very dangerous. You can easily go kidnap by the bad guys too. That is why I think it is scary to walk on the street during the midnight. For me, I will not go out over 11 o’clock.

Topic 23: What’s Worth the Effort

Although the girl Squeaky often says that it is very hard to take care of his brother Raymond, but I think she still care her brother. Raymond is a trouble maker and it let Squeaky feel very angry. The girl Squeaky often helped her brother Raymond to solve the trouble that he made. This can show that he really care about his brother. If there are some people bully Raymond. She will save him without reason. If it turns out to me I won’t save Raymond because I will be angry if a person keeps making troubles. I will not help him fight or argue to the fighter. There is always a reason for someone to fight you.  Although squeaky and Raymond often fight with each other, but they are still family. That is the Squeak’s point of view. She probably thinks family should help each other. She can’t let her brother got hurt. She care about his brother. I think Squeaky doesn’t like his brother but doesn’t dislike his brother. This is my point of view. Sometimes they argue with each other but sometimes they help each other. I believe Squeaky and Raymond care about each other like a brother and sister.

Topic 22: The Resolution

In a story, resolution is the end part of the story. It tells the reader the ending of the story. In my story, peter and Mike both wants the burger so they are arguing with each other. Still, the burger is peters. Mike really wants the burger. He had try out all the way to persuade or force peter to gave him the burger but peter is just to strong of Mike. Mike is very fat and short but peter is very strong and tall. He also know the kon-fu so he can easily beat up Mike. In the story there is no hero but there is a winner.  Peter lee wins the battle and get the burger. they play paper scissor rock. The person who wins three times could own the burger. Paper scissors rock is a hand game usually played by two people, where players simultaneously form one of three shapes with an outstretched hand. The "rock" beats scissors, the "scissors" beat paper and the "paper" beats rock; if both players throw the same shape, the game is tied. The first round I use paper and he use rock. The second round I use paper and he use rock. The third round, I use rock because I know he will use scissor. The conflict ended with a happy ending.

Topic 24: Suspicion

Suspicion is a feeling you get when you don’t trust someone or something. People can be suspicion in different ways. I think the most suspicious people are the one who are consume stiff from phone. I think they are suspicion because I can’t see the product and the quality of the product. I can not see is she or she lying or not. The most common one is he or she calls you and tells you he/she will help you buy lotto. This is just the first call. The second call he will tells you he brought the lotto for you and it wins a million from the lotto. He will tell you send the money to them so they can get you the lotto for you. After you give then the money, they will disappear and you can not find them again. This one is very common in the past. All the people want money and some of them were stupid. They think they could pay a little and gets many. That is impossible. How much you pay equals to how much you get. People think there are distrustful because there are many example that shows they are lire.  

Topic 21: Falling Action

Falling action is the part of a literary plot that occurs after the climax has been reached and the conflict has been resolved. During the falling action the conflict between Mike and peter were resolve. They are arguing about the Hansberger. We both want the Hansberger so we were competing with each other to see who can own the Hansberger. We use many ways like paper scissor rock, fighting, playing games or other things. There are many ways to compete but our final gold is to get the Hansberger so we choose an easy way to see who can own the burger. the way we choose is to play paper scissor rock. paper scissors rock is a hand game usually played by two people, where players simultaneously form one of three shapes with an outstretched hand. The "rock" beats scissors, the "scissors" beat paper and the "paper" beats rock; if both players throw the same shape, the game is tied. The first round I use paper and he use paper too. The second round I use rock and he use dock too. The third round, I use rock because I know he will use scissor. The conflict ended with a happy ending.

Topic 20: The Climax

There is a new restaurant beside the street. It is very big and clean. The music sounds peaceful and makes you comfortable. The food is yummy so there are many people inside the restaurant. Peter Lee and Mike Chao are eating Hansberger and they all buy a burger but Mike dislikes his burger so he wants to trade with me. But my burger taste very good and I really like it so I refuse the trade. Mike’s father is a general is the army which controls many solider and guns. His father is very rich and powerful so he really wants the burger. He goes out to ask the waiter to give another burger that Peter Lee eat but that burger is the last one. Mike Chao knows he cannot get it from the restaurant so he starts to trade with me. At first, he ask me peacefully but I refuse him so his start to use money to buy the burger from me. He use ten times of money to trade with me but I really likes the burger so I still refuse him. He starts to use his father’s power so we both get angry. The fight began.

19: My Character

My character is the boy who called Mike. He is a fat person. He is not tall ether. His cloth size is XXXL. He has big glasses on his eyes which make him looks like a gangster. He also has black eyes. He is fashion people. He ware gangster clothing and gangster pant. His favorite food is burger. he always eat burger because he likes it. He can do everything to get a yummy burger. his habit is to use his money and his father’s power to scare people. His father is a general is the army which controls many solider and guns. He lives with his father because His mother died when he is young. His house is very big and pretty. It has many floors. In the house, there are many girls that ware maid uniform. There are buy from the night club. Well, it more likes steel. He has a bad personality which you could easily see on the last sentence. Even though he don’t have the power to get those girl but his father likes him very much so he will do everything for his son. That why he is not afraid to steel Hansberger from me.

Topic 18: My Rising Action

Rising action is a related series of incidents build toward the point of greatest interest. Rising action is placed between the climax and the exposition. My rising action start with Mike walked in the restaurant. He buys a cheese burger but it taste not good and he saw my Hansberger. It looks very good so he wants to trade with me but I do not want to trade to him so refuse the trade. This is the middle part of the rising action. The other part of my rising action is the part that Mike use different way to persuade me or get another one. He try to buy another Hansberger but there is no more Hansberger to sell so he had to use another way to get the Hansberger and he saw that I do own one of the Hansberger that he want so he try to persuade me in different method. He use ten times of the money to buy my Hansberger but I do not need the money so he use another way to persuade me. He bake me, he use all of the way but none of the way can persuade me so he challenge me.

Topic 17: My Conflict

Topic 17: My Conflict

Peter lee

2013/4/17

Character- peter and Mike place- Street and restaurant time- 12 o’clock conflict- Mike wants the Hansberger that peter eat but peter does not want to trade with him so he go to ask the servicer to give me another burger but the servicer said that there is no more that kind of burger. The burger that your friend eats is the last burger we have. Mick was really angry because he hates the burger that he had call. He really wants the burger that I was eaten. So he try to persuade me to trade the burger with him. He pay me money, he give me rare stiff, but I do not want those stiff because I do not need it. He got angry by my attitude so he challenges me and I was a man so I can refuse the fight. The way we fight is to play paper scissor rock. The person who win three times could own the burger. At the end, peter won and Mike cannot get the burger but he know he promise me so he walk out with an anglyness. This is a external conflict and this type of conflict is man vs. man  

Topic 16: my exposition

Peter lee

2013/4/13

Journal

Topic 16: my exposition

Peter and Mike was walking on a street and looking for eat. They saw a restaurant call NEAT. They go in to the NEAT and sit down the seat to eat the things. Inside the restaurant NEAT, there is a cool music which is very fashion. It is one of the famous groups of the hip pop. The music sound rock and cool. Peter buys a Hansberger and Mike buys a cheese burger. Our food tastes like a heaven and smells really good. The Hansberger looks like a huge ball. and it touch like a bread. All the spices were inside the burger. Mike think mines burger is better than his burger so he want to trade the burger from me. My answer of the question is no but he really wants the burger so he tries to buy a new burger from the restaurant. They said there are no that kind of the burgers anymore. The entire Hansberger got sell. He really wants it so he challenges me. We had had a treaty. Who wins the paper scissor rock can choose the Hansberger first and who lose the paper scissor rock will need to pay the lunch. At the end, I win the game.

Topic 15: Hip-Hop Language

Topic 15: Hip-Hop Language

Peter Lee

2013/4/10

I am a sport man

And I like to play basketball man

Sub, you want to PK with me

Man you suck

My basketball is very strong baby

O o o baby

O o o baby

No one can beat me

The way I attack was very mean.

Yo my other sport is very strong too

Cause I look so handsome and cool like you

My fighting is also strong too

Like to Bruce lee yo

When I go out to play other fight other people

I will dress very cool bro

If they lose or got kill

No one will remember them because they are a joke

 If they didn’t go kill

I will send them to a jail

They will get judge by the judge

The punish was hard

So they will go find mister lee

And bake him like a boss

But my Specialty is not this

It is fighting and sport

Man I am just so powerful

When I play basketball

I will drib the ball

Jump and shoot in the hole

Can you believe my skill?

This is like a bro

Someone wants to fight with me?

I will take it all

And win the ball

Topic 13: My Style

Topic 13: My Style

Peter lee

2013/3/27

I am a style person. A had many style. Sometimes I am cool and fashion sometimes i am sloppy and sleepy. This means I have two types of dressing. The first type of dressing is the fashion dressing which is similar to gangster dressing. A black or white shirt plus a blue jeans. The second way of dressing is the sloppy dressing. The way you dress is felling and guessing. You just take your shirt and pant out and didn’t look at it. I have two types of talking. The first type is gangster talking. It is like, yo what’s up, cool man, sub, got a problem?. The second way is the normal way which like the way of educated people use. the way I walk is very straight like a soldier in military. I am a lazy person. I like to stay at home and dislike to go out. I sleep a lot more than normal. It is like 9 hour to 12 hour. I sleep when I arrive home and wake up at middle of the night to write my home work. Any way I am a lazy person with a fashion dressing and a soldier in military walk. 

Topic 12: List Poem

People play ball

Like basketball, tennis ball, dauge ball, soccer ball, and bounce ball

Those ball can bounce and drib

Baseball, paper ball, metal ball, wood ball, and foot ball

Cannot bounce and drib

But those balls are ball

So you can play it like a ball

Topic 11: My List

Peter lee

2013/3/22

English

1Baseball

2Basketball

3Daugeball

4Soccer ball

5Paperball

6Bounce ball

7Metal ball

8Wood ball

9Football

10tennis ball

Topic 10: Acrostic

JOURNAL

MS ESL II English - Mr. Michael McCool

Topic 10: Acrostic

Due Date Wed, Mar 20

Assignment Date Tue, Mar 19

peter lee

2013/3/20

peter is cool 

eager of girl 
teenager of school
eat many things 
ride on a roand
like a f1
everyone thinks it's cool
everyone likes it

bill is rich
i want to be like him
list of company he has own
like Microsoft
gaming computer needs it 
apple can use it 
every computers need it

Topic 9: Introduction to Me

JOURNAL

MS ESL II English - Mr. Michael McCool

Topic 9: Introduction to Me

Due Date Mon, Mar 18

Assignment Date Fri, Mar 18

Peter lee

2013/3/17

        My name is peter lee. I have a black eyes and perfect muscles. My height and weight is 170cm 60kg. I have a mother and a father. We live together in a house. My grandpa and grandma treat me very nice. They often give my money to buy stiff that I like. I also have many cousins and uncles but they are not impotent. The most important uncle is the one that live with me. He is a computer engineer. He knows a lot of stiff about computer and technology. When I have question on my hw, I will go to my uncle’s room to tell him teach me. I have many habits. Some are external some are internal. I like to watch novel and play sport. Those sports are related to ball like basketball, baseball, or volleyball.. Sometimes I play catch the flag too. My reflection of the blogger is boring because I had rarely write diary and I had no story to tell. I don’t really hate it or like it.

Topic 8: My Conflict

JOURNAL

MS ESL II English - Mr. Michael McCool

Topic 8: My Conflict

Due Date Fri, Mar 15

Assignment Date Thu, Mar 14

Peter lee

2013/3/15

The first time I take airplane is 18 years old. We are going to the unite state to find our uncle. Unfortunately, one of the engine got explore so the airplane falls down in to a forest. No one had survived except me and my young sister. She doesn’t have any scars but I do. I have many scars on my body and I was bleeding. She helps me stop the bleeding. The good thing is, this island is not a dangerous island. I and my sister go to find food and fresh water. We had hunted many animals and fishes. We also collect the water from the river. We make fire by using cigarette lighter. We also makes SOS flag so if the rescue people had come, they will find use easily. Sometimes we will have some problem like bite from the snake or saw a big tiger. It is very dangerous and we had survive in the island. Few months later, the rescue people had come and they save use back to our home.

Topic 7: Three Pigs

Topic 7: Three Pigs

DUE DATE  Wed, Mar 13

ASSIGNMENT DATE  Tue, Mar 12

Peter lee

2013/3/13

Once upon a time, there were three little pigs that live in the house with their mother. In their town, there were many dangerous things like wolves. They liked to eat meat expactually pigs. Most of the pigs got eaten by those wolves. The pig mother tried to carried her young to a batter place. In this journal the mother and the other two pigs got killed by the wolf. The only survivor is the youngest pig. The mother hided him on a tree and no one had found him. After the event, someone walk through the forest and he saw the pig. He is Bruce Lee. He took the pig back home and gave him some food to eat. After the eating, Bruce Lee goes to practice his kicking. The pig saw it and said “ I want to learn kon-fu from you and revenge to the wolves. Bruce Lee checked his body and he found out that he was a kon-fu generous. He learn many kinds of kon-fu 10 years later, he goes back to the town and kill all the wolves.

topic 6: Analogy

JOURNAL

MS ESL II English - Mr. Michael McCool

Topic 6: Analogy

Due Date Sat, Mar 09

Assignment Date Fri, Mar 08

        Boxing is very similar then fighting. boxing is a martial art and combat sport in which two people engage in a contest of strength, reflexes, and endurance by throwing punches with gloved hands. On the other hand, fighting does not using gloves. Also, fighting can use your legs and elbows. You can also use weapons like guns; sword, even a grenade but no one would use it. Grenade is very expensive. Lets back to our topic. Even thought there is such a difference, but the main thing is the same. Their goal is to hurt people, even kill. Those two actively are focusing on how much damage you had given to your opponent. No matter what way you use, if you can damage people, then it is a good way. In those two activity people will get hurt easily so a good fighter should a strong muscle, power paunch, useful skill, and strong footwall. If you have those points, than you are very lucky. You will become a good fighter an boxer. That is the analogy of those two actively.

Topic 3: Below the Surface

JOURNAL

MS ESL II English - Mr. Michael McCool

Topic 3: Below the Surface

Due Date Sat, Mar 02

Assignment Date Fri, Mar 01

I had a classmate that looks like my young brother. The only differences are the weight and height. The taller people get bigger boon so they’ll weight much heavier but they looks like each other. When the first time l talk to him, the way he talk is similar to my brother. But when the time goes longer, I discover that his personality is different than my brother. He likes to read and write but my brother like to go out and play. He is active. I felt like I judge him by looking on his surface but he is a good person and a nice classmate in our class. As I just said, he looks like my young brother but his personality is different. Their habits are different too. That classmate likes to play computer and video games. His favorite game is halo. My brother is very different than him. He is raring playing video games. In fact, is likes to go out and play games such as basketball and baseball. That is how I fell. 

Topic 5: Fighting Words

Peter Lee

2013/3/7

MS ESL II English - Mr. Michael McCool

Topic 5: Fighting Words

Due Date  Fri, Mar 08

Assignment Date  Thu, Mar 07

When I was third grade, I had a fight with my classmate. During the recess time, I was in bathroom and he was playing the door. He slammed the door to be and I get hit by the door. He did not say sorry to me and I was very angry to him so we are arguing with each other. He said soothing rude to me so I punch him in the face and he falls down. His heads got broke and the blood comes out. After this event most of my classmate said I was doing a good job because he always using violence to threats people and we all thing this is not a right things to do because you can still solve things by using other ways like persuade but if my brother, sister, or close friend got bully by other people are hurt by other people, I will protect them and take them out of danger cause your cousin is different from other people. they are one of your family so I’ll protect them. 

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Peter lee

English

2013/3/5

Oppose

When I was young, I saw a lot of story that had to do with the centarcluse. In those stories, all the good kids could get the gift that they want and I strongly believe that. When the quesmass came, I always get the gift that I wish to get but when I grow up, I sleep later then before so when the quesmass came, I saw my dad walked in to my bedroom. I pretend I was sleep already. He walked quietly and put my gift in the quesmass sock. Suddenly, I get shock. Everything I thought is not true. The stories are lying. There is no centarcluse in the world. It is all fake. The gift you get is not from centarcluse. It is from your dad or your mom. That is way you can get the gift you want easily cause your parent knew it. Centarcluse will not know what gift is your favorite. It all makes sense now. I know there is no centarcluse but I still wants to check so I ask my father “can I go to the north pole and see centarcluse?” my father replied” there is no centarcluse.”

Topic 1 Poetry

peter lee
EsLEnglish2
2013/2/8

difference between Poem and writing

Poem is a thing that can express your felling. it is very different than writing. There are many forms of writing like essay, summary ... Those writing use long, paragraph, sentence to describe a thing, unlike poem, it use sort sentence to describe things. Sometimes there is only one word in a sentence; also, poem can rime by listening the end sound of the poem. Poem can do many things that writing can’t do such as using short sentence do describe things. Writing use many words to describe things, sometimes even a essay. Poem and writing still have some similarity. Those 2 things can describe things or filing in a word. I had saw poem and writing before. Some good author of the book cannot write a good poem. On the other hand, a good poem writer could not write a good story too. This can shows that writing is very different with other. If it is, than a good author con write a good poem too. Also those two things had different uses. Poem is to tell your story or your felling to touch audiences’ heart. Essay is to write something facts.

What's worth the effort?

peter lee
EsLEnglish2
2013/2/8

What's worth the effort?

when i was young, i always dream that i could drive a car and carry my friends to other places to play. I also dream that I could drive the car very fast like 300km/1h. I have never drive a car before but I had drive mini F1. It is in Condign. I really enjoy in the speed but according to the law of Taiwan, only 18 years old citizen could tack the test. If you pass the test, you can buy your own car and drive it as soon as you want. On the other hand, if you didn’t, you can drive it. If you drive without a driving license, you might get catch and go to jail. Anyway, I want to be a driver expertually F1 because I enjoy the speed. ( as I just said). When I go to condign, I always go to practice because I really like it and I want it to be my habit. Also, I want to grow up faster so I can take the test and became a driver. Ill work and get the money to by the car. Perhaps I am 18 years old right now.

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