Topic 20: The Climax

There is a new restaurant beside the street. It is very big and clean. The music sounds peaceful and makes you comfortable. The food is yummy so there are many people inside the restaurant. Peter Lee and Mike Chao are eating Hansberger and they all buy a burger but Mike dislikes his burger so he wants to trade with me. But my burger taste very good and I really like it so I refuse the trade. Mike’s father is a general is the army which controls many solider and guns. His father is very rich and powerful so he really wants the burger. He goes out to ask the waiter to give another burger that Peter Lee eat but that burger is the last one. Mike Chao knows he cannot get it from the restaurant so he starts to trade with me. At first, he ask me peacefully but I refuse him so his start to use money to buy the burger from me. He use ten times of money to trade with me but I really likes the burger so I still refuse him. He starts to use his father’s power so we both get angry. The fight began.

19: My Character

My character is the boy who called Mike. He is a fat person. He is not tall ether. His cloth size is XXXL. He has big glasses on his eyes which make him looks like a gangster. He also has black eyes. He is fashion people. He ware gangster clothing and gangster pant. His favorite food is burger. he always eat burger because he likes it. He can do everything to get a yummy burger. his habit is to use his money and his father’s power to scare people. His father is a general is the army which controls many solider and guns. He lives with his father because His mother died when he is young. His house is very big and pretty. It has many floors. In the house, there are many girls that ware maid uniform. There are buy from the night club. Well, it more likes steel. He has a bad personality which you could easily see on the last sentence. Even though he don’t have the power to get those girl but his father likes him very much so he will do everything for his son. That why he is not afraid to steel Hansberger from me.

Topic 18: My Rising Action

Rising action is a related series of incidents build toward the point of greatest interest. Rising action is placed between the climax and the exposition. My rising action start with Mike walked in the restaurant. He buys a cheese burger but it taste not good and he saw my Hansberger. It looks very good so he wants to trade with me but I do not want to trade to him so refuse the trade. This is the middle part of the rising action. The other part of my rising action is the part that Mike use different way to persuade me or get another one. He try to buy another Hansberger but there is no more Hansberger to sell so he had to use another way to get the Hansberger and he saw that I do own one of the Hansberger that he want so he try to persuade me in different method. He use ten times of the money to buy my Hansberger but I do not need the money so he use another way to persuade me. He bake me, he use all of the way but none of the way can persuade me so he challenge me.

Topic 17: My Conflict

Topic 17: My Conflict

Peter lee

2013/4/17

Character- peter and Mike place- Street and restaurant time- 12 o’clock conflict- Mike wants the Hansberger that peter eat but peter does not want to trade with him so he go to ask the servicer to give me another burger but the servicer said that there is no more that kind of burger. The burger that your friend eats is the last burger we have. Mick was really angry because he hates the burger that he had call. He really wants the burger that I was eaten. So he try to persuade me to trade the burger with him. He pay me money, he give me rare stiff, but I do not want those stiff because I do not need it. He got angry by my attitude so he challenges me and I was a man so I can refuse the fight. The way we fight is to play paper scissor rock. The person who win three times could own the burger. At the end, peter won and Mike cannot get the burger but he know he promise me so he walk out with an anglyness. This is a external conflict and this type of conflict is man vs. man  

Topic 16: my exposition

Peter lee

2013/4/13

Journal

Topic 16: my exposition

Peter and Mike was walking on a street and looking for eat. They saw a restaurant call NEAT. They go in to the NEAT and sit down the seat to eat the things. Inside the restaurant NEAT, there is a cool music which is very fashion. It is one of the famous groups of the hip pop. The music sound rock and cool. Peter buys a Hansberger and Mike buys a cheese burger. Our food tastes like a heaven and smells really good. The Hansberger looks like a huge ball. and it touch like a bread. All the spices were inside the burger. Mike think mines burger is better than his burger so he want to trade the burger from me. My answer of the question is no but he really wants the burger so he tries to buy a new burger from the restaurant. They said there are no that kind of the burgers anymore. The entire Hansberger got sell. He really wants it so he challenges me. We had had a treaty. Who wins the paper scissor rock can choose the Hansberger first and who lose the paper scissor rock will need to pay the lunch. At the end, I win the game.

Topic 15: Hip-Hop Language

Topic 15: Hip-Hop Language

Peter Lee

2013/4/10

I am a sport man

And I like to play basketball man

Sub, you want to PK with me

Man you suck

My basketball is very strong baby

O o o baby

O o o baby

No one can beat me

The way I attack was very mean.

Yo my other sport is very strong too

Cause I look so handsome and cool like you

My fighting is also strong too

Like to Bruce lee yo

When I go out to play other fight other people

I will dress very cool bro

If they lose or got kill

No one will remember them because they are a joke

 If they didn’t go kill

I will send them to a jail

They will get judge by the judge

The punish was hard

So they will go find mister lee

And bake him like a boss

But my Specialty is not this

It is fighting and sport

Man I am just so powerful

When I play basketball

I will drib the ball

Jump and shoot in the hole

Can you believe my skill?

This is like a bro

Someone wants to fight with me?

I will take it all

And win the ball